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个人简介

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I hold a BA degree in Political Science and Anthropology from the University of Rochester. I am currently a strategy consulting associate in Hong Kong.

During my undergrad, I was a translator for my school’s Chinese admission team, an Anthropology teaching assistant, and a research assistant.

As a native speaker of English with years of experience studying in the US and HK, I am happy to assist non-English speaking students with essay writing and editing. 

为什么要选我:

1.As an politics and anthropology major, I was heavy trained in the writing and reading. I was selected during my undergraduate years to be a translator between University of Rochester’s admission office to be a translator between Chinese parents and school officials. I was also a student host for new student orientation in Hong Kong. Being able to speak natively in English and Chinese has been a great asset in college admission, and hopefully I can bring some of my insights to you.

2.As a native speaker of English with years of experience studying in the US and HK, I am also happy to share with you my experiences through the admission process.  

我能帮你做什么:

Things I am good at:

Structuring essay, getting your points through (essential with a word limit!), grammar proofreading and editing, and giving you a helping hand through college admission. I will also make sure your essay sounds fluent to the native American reader.

American college admissions are not as mysterious and complicated as it sounds like, I can sort out your priorities and make sure you are on your right track to your dream school. 

求学经历

Bachelor

学校:University of Rochester

专业:Political Science

Bachelor

学校:University of Rochester

专业:Anthropology

服务

该导师的特色服务

可提供服务:

Personal Statement / Essay Writing Proofreading

课程简述: US Commonapp Essay / Application Essay / PS / Cover Letter / Resume Editing

适用用户: Students planning to apply to the US for undergraduate degrees.

服务说明:

在已有文书的基础上进行以下精修(如需从零开始进行单篇文书写作,请选第三项): 1/ 结构调整:理清文书结构,让文书逻辑清晰凸显起承转合,全面覆盖申请表达要点 2/ 内容挖掘:围绕学校特点和招生侧重,深度挖掘构建个人竞争力模型,用细节彰显匹配度 3/ 语法优化:全面升级表达方式和语法,让文书成为申请季最好的个人宣传材料 (常规服务请选第一项,预计7-14天完成;加急请选第二项,预计7天内完成;从零开始进行单篇文书写作请选第三项,预计7-14天完成)

1.Detailed proofreading: grammar, structure, tone, and overall flow

2.Content: Making sure your story is standing out and unique to your personal experience

3.See below service for essays starting from scratch

Essay Writing (from scratch)

课程介绍:

深谙文书撰写和招生官评估申请材料的重点;招生评估不同于语言考试,重点并不是考察文章是否华丽、语言是否地道,所以本服务重点在于帮助学员认识自己并挖掘学习和生活中的复杂性,形成充足的文书论据,打动招生官。鉴于此,本人并不倾向于修改学员已撰写好的文书,而是希望能在充分沟通之后,直接重新撰写或者带领学员一起重新撰写。

1.Writing essays from the beginning:

A,Brainstorming

B,Structuring

C,Connecting ideas into cohesive essay

D,(Other details same as above description^)

Application Essay (1000 words limit) 文书材料构思和润色修改

课程内容:给学生上课,帮助学生挖掘合理的素材和话题;指导学生构思文书的结构和逻辑;

服务说明: Required to optional essay, creative question, Why [school name] essays 

擅长领域
Political Economy International Relations Political Science Public Policy
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